Review Writing: Key Vocabulary

Register: Informal/neutral Use: all your colourful vocabulary: Phrasal verbs/idioms/impressive collocations.	Forms and conventions: Title: for films/books/restaurants use the name/title or if think up an imaginative title using an idiom/expression.
Planning, 6 step system: 1.        Read task, underline content points. 2.        Divide content points into paragraphs: Intro, décor, ambiance, service, food, recommendation. 3.        WHAT do you want to say? Add your notes to each paragraph in simple form. 4.        HOW are you going to say that? Brainstorm advanced grammar and vocabulary for each note. 5.        Forms and conventions: Title paragraph titles, fixed introduction. 6.        Write! Remember word limit is: 280-320	Introduction: Personal anecdote to grab attention. Introduce name of book/film, restaurant + location, course, TV show etc. Seldom do I find the time to…, however when I do take time out of my hectic schedule, I like nothing more than… Being a bit of a film buff/book worm/foody, the news that … had opened a new restaurant/released a new film/book had me itching to try/see/read it. So last week I popped down with a friend to check it out. Having never seen/read/tried… before I approached … with a sense of trepidation, not knowing what to expect. Soon however, all my fears were allayed.
Book reviews: Vocab to describe the book in general: a page-turner / a white-knuckle ride / a tearjerker / a laugh a minute / I couldn’t put it down. Vocab to describe specific parts: a slow start / a gentle introduction /gripping climax / nail-biting conclusion / cliff-hanger ending/ a shocking twist in the tail Setting: The book is set in _______(place/time) The action takes place in ______ (place/time) the present day (now) an alternate reality where vampires / wizards walk the earth a sleepy village in the USA the bustling city of New York Plot: The plot centres around / focuses on (the adventures / lives of _________) The plot follows the adventures of _________(character name) Characters: Villain / hero / heroine / anti-hero / main character / protagonist The characters are believable / well-crafted / a bit 2 dimensional.	Film/TV reviews: General: An all-star cast heavily influenced by the films of.. glowing reviews startling originality suspense builds up a polished performance a bold experiment an accomplished actor an unmitigated disaster (bad film) a dazzling display of his/her talents made a lasting impression on me. Brought a tear to my eye Like watching paint dry (boring) I was on the edge of my seat (exciting) A blockbuster (big commercial film eg Superman) … sets off an amazing chain of events Gripping film (exciting) The director/author evoked a magical atmosphere … awakened my interest in… Hold my attention Capture the audience’s imagination. Spectacular set-pieces (main action scenes) … is cast in the role of… … is miscast in the role of… …gives a(n) (un)convincing performance as… The film is let down by a clichéd script.
Restaurant review: Hearty meal Wholesome food Piping-hot Succulent/juicy (meat) Creamy With a kick (spicy) Crunchy/crispy Well-seasoned Packed with flavour A steaming plate of.. Hungry/starving/ravenous/famished Bustling eatery(restaurant) Lively atmosphere Service with a smile A plate piled high with.. Mouth-watering To die for Heavenly To lick your lips in anticipation Roast Pan-fried Grilled Steamed Freshly-baked	Restaurants cont. Make a pig of one’s self To feast/gorge on (eat a lot of) To eat/drink to your heart’s content Devour/gobble up Savour Nibble Bite Lick Aromas wafting from the kitchen Cheap – economical/reasonably-priced Expensive – pricey/costs an arm and a leg €20 a head (per person)
Killer Lines: Were I to sum up … in one word, it would be… … left a lot to be desired (wasn’t good enough) …more than lives up to the hype (is as good as everyone says it is) … is by far and away the best … you’re likely to … this year … really raises the bar (sets a higher standard) … sets the benchmark for other (others will be judges against how good it is) … ticks all the right boxes … holds up well in comparison with … …comes off badly in comparison with …	Grammar check list Have you included? ·         An inversion (not only/no sooner/seldom) ·         An inverted conditional (Were we to…) ·         A participle clause (Being…/Having gone…) ·         A double comparative (The more we… the more) ·         A cleft sentence (What is most crucial is…) ·         Idioms ·         Phrasal verbs

Article Writing

An article

-          is a piece of writing usually intended for publication in a newspaper, magazine or journal

-          is written for a wide audience, so it is essential to attract and retain the readers’ attention

-          may include amusing stories, reported speech and descriptions

-          can be formal or informal, depending on the target audience

-          should be written in an interesting or entertaining manner

-          should give opinions and thoughts, as well as facts

-          is in a less formal style than a report

An article can

-          describe an experience, event, person or place

-          present an opinion or balanced argument

-          compare and contrast

-          provide information

-          offer suggestions

-          offer advice

A realistic article should consist of:

1.        an eye-catching title which attracts the readers’ attention and suggests the theme of the article. (Think about why you read a magazine or newspaper article recently - what made you read it?) Articles can also have subheadings before each paragraph.

2.       an introduction which clearly defines the topic to be covered and keeps the reader’s attention.

3.       the main body of two to four paragraphs in which the topic is further developed in detail.

4.       the conclusion - summarising the topic or a final opinion, recommendation or comment.

REMEMBER

Before you begin writing it is important to consider:

-          where is the article going to appear - in a newspaper or magazine?

-          who are the intended readers - a specific group such as students or teenagers, or adults in general?

-          what is the aim of the article - to advise, suggest, inform, compare and contrast, describe, etc.?

These three points are the deciding factors in the layout of your article, its style, language and level of formality.

Determine the information you are going to use and organize your ideas carefully into paragraphs.

Each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence.

The article could be formal, semi-formal or informal, depending on your intended audience.

Use vocabulary and descriptive language appropriate for the article. Linking words and expressions, and a variety of vocabulary will only improve your work and make it more interesting.

DO NOT use over-personal or over-emotional language or simplistic vocabulary.

DO NOT talk about yourself. You are writing for the general public, not a close circle of friends.

Your opinions are only interesting to other people if you can make them amusing, justify them or explain them.

Use of English: Part 2

3 - The Goulburn Valley

Essay Writing Task

Read the two texts below.

Write an essay summarising and evaluating the key points from both texts. Use your own words throughout as far as possible and include your own ideas in your answers.

Tackling Traffic Congestion Policy-makers employ a wide range of measures to tackle the problem of traffic congestion. Enforcement schemes such as setting strict speed limits on major roads and the use of congestion charges in city centres are two such examples as are vehicle exclusion zones or parking restrictions in busy pedestrian areas. However, it also makes sense to encourage motorists to become less reliant on their car. This can be achieved by making public transport more efficient and promoting the benefits of car-sharing with work colleagues, thus reducing weekly fuel bills. And the increasing number of cycle lanes on many roads is further evidence of how to win the hearts and minds of motorists in the fight against congestion.

The Joy of Motoring Recent research into the attitudes of motorists shows we are still more than happy to get behind the wheel. Despite rising fuel costs, insurance premiums and frequent traffic jams, 9 out of 10 of us still enjoy driving. Whether it’s visiting friends and relations, taking the family for a day out or even commuting to work, the car remains first choice for many people. Experts argue that unlike public transport, the car leaves us in charge of our own destiny, giving us the freedom to travel when and where we want. The car also gives us the opportunity to express ourselves. The kind of vehicle we drive tells the world something about who we are or what we aspire to be. Cars are not simply a means of transport but also something we wear.

(240-280 words)

Letter Writing Task

A popular English-language magazine has invited readers to send in letters sharing their recent experience of making an important decision. You decide to send in a letter in which you briefly describe the situation and explain the reasons why you took an important decision, and assess what the consequences of that decision might be in the future.

Write your letter. You do not need to write any postal addresses.

You should include 2-3 examples of the following:

• inversions
• passive voice
• advanced reported speech structures
• gerunds and/or infinitives

Key Word Transformation

Copy and paste the following tasks into a Word document and fill in the answers.

Part One

1. Electricity is getting very expensive these days.
cost
The  higher and higher these days.

2. Unemployment has risen considerably over the last eighteen months and the government is under pressure to find a solution.
increase
The government is under pressure due to  over the last eighteen months.

3. The minister's resignation from the government was caused by the discovery of his role in the financial scandal.
led
The discovery of the minister's role in the financial scandal  the government.

4. Oh, there you are! I didn't even know you had gone out!
unaware
I  fact that you had gone out.

5. Don't get involved in this John, it has nothing to do with you.
keep
This has nothing to do with you so .

6. I really can't understand why he can't finish the project on time.
baffled
I am really  to finish the project on time.

7. Mr. Edwards was sacked partly because of his arriving late to work.
contributed
Mr. Edwards' constant lateness  from the company.

8. You can't just suddenly decide to go on a safari. You need to plan things very carefully.
spur
Going on safari isn't a decision you can make  moment. You need to plan things very carefully.

Part Two

1. She wants nothing less than to get that job. It would be a dream come true.
set
She has  getting that job.

2. If they ever discover your role in the incident, you will go to prison.
light
If your role in the incident , you'll go to prison.

3. Harry plays tennis much better than I do.
nearly
I am not  tennis player as Harry is.

4. Both candidates for the job are strong. They are both equally good.
hardly
There is  the two job candidates.

5. That child is twice as tall as he was two years ago.
doubled
That child's  in the last two years.

6. As soon as I arrived at the pub, a fight started.
sooner
No  a fight broke out in the pub.

7. There were very few people who understood what the professor said in the meeting.
virtually
There  who understood what the professor said in the meeting.

8. The bank robbers had disappeared completely by the time the police arrived.
sign
There  robbers when the police arrived.

Gerunds and Infinitives

To consolidate your understandings of gerunds and infinitives, follow the link below for a range of activities:

Gerunds and Infinitives